Based on a line from Ingmar Bergman's The Seventh Seal.
"Love is the blackest of all plagues... if one could die of it, there would be some pleasure in love, but you don't die of it."
That's pretty nice one, try to use high vocabulary to make it more good because haiku contains and it has it's own impact...by the way, theme's great and you can write one poem on it if you want i'd love to read ouse poem too.
well it's if a first try then you know what you did damn great job even you're too good than me because my first try of poem was damn bad...lol :)
anyway, great job. keep writings :)
That's pretty nice one, try to use high vocabulary to make it more good because haiku contains and it has it's own impact...by the way, theme's great and you can write one poem on it if you want i'd love to read ouse poem too.
well it's if a first try then you know what you did damn great job even you're too good than me because my first try of poem was damn bad...lol :)
anyway, great job. keep writings :)
I loved this. It is very captivating and the thought it creates in my mind is amazing. Very nice for your first, but I believe this would be considered senyru, haiku is normally about nature but perhaps this teeters on the edge of nature. Very nice.