Glass

Glass


Rhythmic words of a broken face
Empty syllables of a hopeless chase
Broken, tattered, jagged, shattered
Sharp and bleeding
Reality sleeping
Love is blurring
Revenge reoccurring
Empty
Blue
Cracking
True
Words and letters never pass
Broken
Shattered
Jagged

 Glass

Author's Note

Favorite line? Please Review! Thanks for reading!

Reviews

[Wolfwind]

I'm not sure why, but the image this brought to mind was a person slowly morphing into a fire of blue flames, where each flame crackles, sending blue glass shards everywhere. Very surealistic. Love the flow and form you used for this piece.

Great Ink!
Aaron

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

"Love is blurring
Revenge reoccurring"

Such a beautiful poem! You did a wonderful job with this (:

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

"love is blurring"
i love it
good job

[Felicity's Eve]

This is soooo incredible!!! You have a gift, dear. ^^

Favorite line?
"Empty syllables of a hopeless chase
Broken, tattered, jagged, shattered"

[Emma Marie Taylor]

Thank you sooooo much! I'm glad you think so! It means a lot to me!

[Felicity's Eve]

No problem ^^