Polaris

Hi. This is my first real project, that I am planning on finishing until the end, but really, that doesn't mean much. Anyway, I would love some constructive criticism, since I am always trying to improve; although, I am an untrained writer who has no instruction other than public school English classes, so don't expect it to be fantastic. I would really love it if you paid attention to characterization, as that is what I am the least confident about in my writing. Thanks so much, and I hope you enjoy.