what next?

referring to Vol's new group!

The dishy Barista made coffee,  tasty too

made A1 as perfectionists  do

Chatted a while as did my two friends

listening the other to see what chat lends

We laughed and considered sharing a lot

come up with maybe - a bit of a plot

But our trials were soon a terrible mess

not easily remedied, too hard to address

But I warbled out like a stupid gal fool

'Let's form a triumverate writing POOL 

We can sit at laptops or whatever's near

inspiration's arrival soon to appear

Our wordy pool will be a right perfect group

for making rhyme jive the boo-To.you loop! 

Reviews

[Vol]

EmmaJoy,
Ha ("Ha" representing the powerful urge to walk away for an hour or two till I can quell this chuckle that won't go away) 1. Personally, what you describe is the flesh and blood version of Ravin' Ink. 2. How much more British can you get? 3. There will come a time when "I'll fly away, oh glory, I'll fly away, When I die, Hallelujah by and by I'll fly away!" And when I land I want to be in a place with your triumvirate writing pool...
Vol

[Amy R]

What a lovely poem, and the way you expressed everything, felt like I am there buying coffee to.

This poem includes the social dynamics of friendship, the joy of sharing ideas, and the playful exploration of creative endeavors. Who wouldn't love a poetry club? Wish we had more of it here.

Nice poem
Thanks for sharing
-Amy

[Coyote Poetry]

I use to do poetry groups. I liked them. We need the motivation of others for us to create dear Emma. I liked the energy of the poetry. Hello dear friend and I hope you are enjoying the days of October.
Coyote

[emmajoygreen]

Hello and welcome! Motivatio via others is a loud Yes! from me too. Ideas developed or diluted, delightfully an' divinely! Or something. So happy your enjoyed this poem's . However I used so much of my own energy to create it, am exhausted now!

Hello to your too, I must come calling to tell that yes, am enjoying October, one has to enjoy what's offering weatherwise but Man has yet to learn how to make 365 days or whatever exactly right for every one walking planet Earth! Best smiles on the way.

[emmajoygreen]

done it again, forgot to edit.. forgive, please.

[Thomas W Case]

Superb work. I can smell and taste the coffee. Great use of the senses.

[emmajoygreen]

Many thank yous, dear sir.. Coffee has to taste like coffee in this house, Thomas. Dish-water - I can make after washing up!

[Thomas W Case]

yes. lol for sure.

[emmajoygreen]

You understood my warped humour!

[Dave W.]

This made my heart happy, really good.....

[emmajoygreen]

No charge for inspiring happy hearts, sir! Thank you

[Marie]

If you are forming a new poetry group, I'm definitely in, Emma. It is so wonderful to see a challenge through and bring it to reality. Penned with humour, I like this poem very much. A lovely picture of the 'cafe', ladies chatting over coffee and enjoying time spent together. Lovely work, Emma. Enjoyed reading. Thank you for sharing...

[emmajoygreen]

Please go over to Vol's group and join. He would be delighted to have you there. Plus anyone else interested - of course!

As always, many thanks for your kind words, sharing is always fun and as as companionable!

[Marie]

Most welcome always, dear Emma...

[Sami Khalil]

A rhyming poem for a group; it is good to accept a challenge and go through it. Some feel it is a terrible mess, others feel it is a success just trying.
Keep your lovely poems and plots coming.

[emmajoygreen]

Many thanks for popping in, Sami. Why not join the Group - a given word a week to be added in any form you like!! Ravin' Ink

[Sami Khalil]

No thank you. You are welcome Emmajoygreen

[Gee]

Good morning, if you are going into rhyming I'm gonna chuck away my quill:)

Hope all is fine with your weather, cold here but dry.
Hope you are well and Sunday for you is quiet and restful, unless wanted otherwise.

[emmajoygreen]

Rhyming: I dare myself!
Weather: daring self to show sun
Health: let you know after 2nd hot choc
Today: walk with lady dog, peace, music!

Hope similar for you and your darlings. Sunshine happiness plus - time to just be!

[Gee]

Good lady is in Marbella, been gone since Thursday(with 3 friends) back tomorrow. I'm chief cook and bottle washer, dog walker and stand in carer for ma in law.
Just back from gym so gonna have a quick chillax, coffee, then prepare work for tomorrow and Scran for the old lady in the garage(conversion)...phew