below us

time's sky had two eyes

 one

miraculously mine  

the other

a reader's

together we saw

below 

 two extraordinary worlds 

displaying

presence

 a distant epicentre

 loth to go

- but -

inevitable

as is a reader

Reviews

[Sameeksha Vadisherla]

This has to be the most refreshing poem I've read today. The imagery of sky having 'two eyes' one representing you and another representing your significant other...a sense of unity.
''all sight of it for now always'' a beautiful description of the timeless bond you share.

Lovely read, Emma. Have a beautiful day :)

[emmajoygreen]

Hello, my friend and thank you so very much for your kind comments. I try to write of what is hoped to be real, even icy Winters!

[Sameeksha Vadisherla]

You're so very welcome!

[Ken Simm.]

Really wonderful. Exceptional and real writing. A way of saying I love you without saying I love you.

[emmajoygreen]

The sky knows what it knows, sir poet. As always, many thanks.

[Ken Simm.]

The sky in different places can be the same.

[emmajoygreen]

But of course!