This has to be the most refreshing poem I've read today. The imagery of sky having 'two eyes' one representing you and another representing your significant other...a sense of unity.
''all sight of it for now always'' a beautiful description of the timeless bond you share.
Lovely read, Emma. Have a beautiful day :)
Posted 2 Months Ago
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1 Month Ago
Hello, my friend and thank you so very much for your kind comments. I try to write of what is hoped.. read moreHello, my friend and thank you so very much for your kind comments. I try to write of what is hoped to be real, even icy Winters!
Wow Emma, below us yes two eyes but can we see eye to eye take my eye or your eye we would be blind but this write make me see sharing our thoughts makes us willing for change and hopefully for the better. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Excellent write
Posted 4 Weeks Ago
2 Weeks Ago
Many belated thanks for such a kind review, Mauricio, Tis true, sharing thoughts can sort out such a.. read moreMany belated thanks for such a kind review, Mauricio, Tis true, sharing thoughts can sort out such a lot: dilute problems, increase smiles, then invite dawn to brighten everyone, everywhere!
Angels flying too close to the ground may be entangled in Controversy… however, the Music is orchestrated with Emotional Echos below the Heavenly Clouds ⛅️ where People wait for Rainbows 🌈 of Mercy… Amen 🙏 Pat
Posted 1 Month Ago
1 Month Ago
I truly and wholly love your reviews, Pat. They are a beautifully unique as can be, dear lady. If p.. read moreI truly and wholly love your reviews, Pat. They are a beautifully unique as can be, dear lady. If people want to dally with someone else's maybe someone else's , they must have the mo controversy they must have the most boring lives! There's always things to do in helping other people, walk dogs for someone with sad feet, wash the feet, sing the songs, cut the grass stop bell-aching! Applies to you and your darling.. forget those you can and remember those that cannot! You be People who wait for Rainbows whilst waiting for the rain to stop and flowers be given their 'liquor'! Hugs, darlin'!
I really enjoyed this poem! It captured me right away, first discussing one eye then the other, mine ;)
EmmaJoy this is so tantalizing yet again- loth... very nice. Reads like a dreamy story, very pleasant.
EmmaJoy,
How many times have people shared the moon while separated by oceans and continents? Every full moon, I try to repost D. H. Lawrence's poem "Aware" and think of my followers, my friends, my students, looking at the same orb float out of the horizon, and each one pause, enthralled, and lost in space... so we are secretly, deeply connected.
Posted 1 Month Ago
1 Month Ago
Oh how we share our lunar lover, Vol. Tell me, sir, what we do without its nightly magic, its mystic.. read moreOh how we share our lunar lover, Vol. Tell me, sir, what we do without its nightly magic, its mystic superglue!
1 Month Ago
EmmaJoy,
I think we would just come apart... ;-}
Vol
How very true, sir Vol. There is magic in the sky when a moon shines.. reflects.. and stays a whil.. read moreHow very true, sir Vol. There is magic in the sky when a moon shines.. reflects.. and stays a while, don't you think.
1 Month Ago
EmmaJoy,
It's what I love most about being a poet. Poets pay more attention, poets pay deeper.. read moreEmmaJoy,
It's what I love most about being a poet. Poets pay more attention, poets pay deeper attention, poets know inherently the difference between comedy and tragedy and are just as likely to cry at one as at the other...
I read this work again! Two worlds. Yours and the readers!!!! Every writer and readers need to under.. read moreI read this work again! Two worlds. Yours and the readers!!!! Every writer and readers need to understand their extraordinary worlds. Thank you for speaking my mind through this poem!
4 Weeks Ago
I hope you know you're welcome to stay in touch when you can, want or need to, Mirror. Yes?
Fascinating how you have split the perspective Emma, and how the narrative shifts accordingly. Excellent ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️
Posted 1 Month Ago
1 Month Ago
I fiddled and fattled this post quite a lot, think it's almost okay but not quite. That said thank y.. read moreI fiddled and fattled this post quite a lot, think it's almost okay but not quite. That said thank you so much. Any positive advice is always welcome!
sometimes, when everything is perfectly aligned, the light displaced can be blinding .. neville
Posted 1 Month Ago
1 Month Ago
Probably! In my world, even the italic mirror strikes back these days! Many thanks for your review.. read moreProbably! In my world, even the italic mirror strikes back these days! Many thanks for your review.
I love the evening sun. When she waves at the moon dancing by. Maybe if we learn. We shared the same oceans, we shared the same sun and the moon. We can seek peace. Wonderful poetry dear Emma.
Coyote
Many thanks for your review, John. Why do people juggle with peace? We can make noise, but, can't m.. read moreMany thanks for your review, John. Why do people juggle with peace? We can make noise, but, can't make the calm and peaceful.. ..
Ghibran,
' To melt and be like a running brook that sings its
melody to the night.'
Am more a short story writer than poet.
Inspiration welcome.
A keen gardener. Love theatre, cinema, the.. more..