Awakening

Awakening

A Poem by emmajoygreen
"

morning thoughts

"
Life should be

neither a dream nor nightmare

but

an awakening

inspired by

a latte and honey toast 

© 2024 emmajoygreen


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Could I add and the words of a friend of the heart. As I don't drink coffee and I'm on a diet.
Wonderful words Emma beautifully arranged this morning.

Posted 1 Year Ago


emmajoygreen

1 Year Ago

Many thanks, Ken, as ever you leave such kind words in your wake and must know how much I appreciate.. read more
the beauty of this poem Emma rests in the open to interpretation first line, in particular, "should" which allows the reader to choose: advisory or admonishment? after several readings I am still not sure which: so I am off for coffee, nicotine and eclairs :)

ken

Posted 1 Year Ago


emmajoygreen

1 Year Ago

Not for me to advise you how to think, Ken e Bujold. But at least I inspired a coffee and eclairs. N.. read more
The whole world is slowly awakening last year and indeed
MOre this year
Once you know you know
All the govt lies
I loved your poem

Posted 1 Year Ago


emmajoygreen

1 Year Ago

And.. (never start with an 'and' but the sun's shining so I can!).. I love your kind review, no .. read more
tell me more about awakening

Posted 1 Year Ago


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emmajoygreen

1 Year Ago

How kind of you to read my short poem, thank you. I'm not here to educate but to inspire.Surely
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Milk and honey. Maybe the greatest motivators in all of history. My land of milk and honey begins with a fifteen-mile long driveway to some woods with a creek... If I could only find the address

Posted 1 Year Ago


emmajoygreen

1 Year Ago

Send out the sniffer dogs - the creek is there somewhere, Vol! Meantime, sending honey toast via p.. read more
Some religious traditions hold that this physical life is completely a dream. I wouldn't mind waking up to a latte and honey toast, but truth be told, I'm a Starbuck's House Blend guy.

Posted 1 Year Ago


emmajoygreen

1 Year Ago

To each his or her own, sir! Enjoy your soon to come treat. Sipping and nibbling mine as I type. .. read more
Love the comfort, the mellow tone of this poem dear Emma. Yes, life should be golden, like “a latte and honey toast”, offered on fine china by a sweetly consistent muse. It should instill within, nothing less than a seed awaiting lyrical birth…oh if only…

Posted 1 Year Ago


emmajoygreen

1 Year Ago

My dear friend and much, much more, your mind flies the same journey as mine, always has done. Lyric.. read more
Emma, I love the feel to this. It radiates Enlightenment

Posted 1 Year Ago


emmajoygreen

1 Year Ago

What a wonderful thing to think, feel and leave, Cherrie. Many thanks plud a gemtle hug.
And a beautiful sunrise smiling over the horizon. Your poem makes this morning feel wonderful. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us.

Posted 1 Year Ago


emmajoygreen

1 Year Ago

What a beautiful addition that would make - a touch of true magic - thank you, willweb and more. .

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Added on May 2, 2023
Last Updated on September 11, 2024
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emmajoygreen
emmajoygreen

Dorchester, Dorset, United Kingdom



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