Bittersweet Blood

The bittersweet blood
Runs down my arm
And to the ground
Like a fine line of yarn

Maybe you can see what
See what you do to me
All I can do is cut
Make my blood flee

The bittersweet blood
Runs down my arm
Falls with a soft thud
Now you can see my harm.

Author's Note

Sorry if its bad :

Reviews

[Bella]

SO amazing....soooo amazing... wow... i cried

[AYVID]

Death is not such a bad thing after all....
let it flow...
settle karmic debts...
move on to the next chapter...

[Zachary_James]

Full of pain and emotion, love it

[C.C. Marx]

we all have our different ways of coping with things, some more painful than others. Nicely done

[Lexi]

It is soo good sometimes people feel that self harming will help but it will only make things worse.

[Mark Emerson]

Love the way it flows from one to the next really good work

[Sarahnade]

Actually, it's not bad at all. Free form writings I think are the best kind, as we have that freedom to add more of our emotions into them. It makes me wonder... as I am recovering from depression, I know this feeling like the back of my hand. I can tell you though... as difficult as things seem right now, it is WELL worth the wait to see that things DO get better in the future... it takes patience, and an unmatched strength to keep the demons in their cages. It took me two years... but I haven't heard a peep from mine since. I'd love to see more from you in the future, you have potential. :)

[Freckled Princess]

This gave me chills and made me cry. Only strong poems are capable of doing that.
Good job.

[Owlgirl]

Wow, the poem is very well written! I love the rhyme scheme and your word choices are amazing. I cannot wait to read more by you! :D

[LittleLover]

This is sad and......interesting......