Opposites

Stab me in the heart
leave me to bleed out.
Don't you see?
You're doing me a favor.
I'm free now.
Or at least,
I'd hope to be.
Turns out heaven,
is the same is hell.
Except one is covered
with harsh, icy winds
and grounds to slip upon,
while the other is like
sitting in the desert
hallucinating water.
Can you guess which is
which?

Reviews

[S. Michael Long]

Heaven is freezing now adays.. but hell was never cold.. thats why hell is so appealing..(I HATE THE COLD) at least in hell you know who the liars are... but in heaven.. god only knows what those fools are thinking.. lol in hell you choose to drink from hallucinating waters, but in heaven you have no choice but to slip and fall on your decisions that you thought were the right choices at one point or another.. (: nice write.. -s