( Extract 3) Edaline Simard's Diary of Completly and Utterly Normal?

( Extract 3) Edaline Simard's Diary of Completly and Utterly Normal?

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                        Midnight

 

Mum and Dad have changed our date for moving! Tomorrow! We're moving tomorrow! We're all packed! I'd better go to sleep, we're leaving in an hour!

 

 



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Comma splice at the end of the last sentence. It needs a conjunction, else it's a run-on.

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Edaline Simard's Diary of Completly and Utterly Normal?

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