The Warrior

Beware the warrior,

 

She is mad,

She is precise,

She is a tiger,

And she will have no mercy.

 

Her knife shines like ice,

Her hair dark like night,

Her feet fall softly,

Her hands fall hard.

 

In the wind she flows,

Dancing with the leaves,

The light dappling on her skin,

She fools you.

 

Author's Note

I got this published! I'm really happy!

Reviews

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

Fierce and powerful! Well done!

[Yozora Misa]

Girl power! Love it. It's very well written.

[Soul Fire]

Love it :D

[emilythestrange]

Thank you

[Brandon Mathis]

Nice!!!!!!!!

[Rhianne Ney]

Warriors are usually guys this is a unique one for you maid a fierce girl warrior! Girls rule in your poem

[emilythestrange]

Thank you

[Rhianne Ney]

You're welcome

[emilythestrange]

:)

[SmileBig :)]

This is really good! I love it! Ur a good writer :)

[emilythestrange]

Thx

[SmileBig :)]

Yup

[BlueJay]

Sounds like someone I don't want to meet in a dark street. The pace to this piece is fantastic! The imagery is so realistic.

[emilythestrange]

Thank you

[Pax]

nice, its like an opening for a book..
great work.

[Matty Bosox]

Emily, you wanted me to tell you why I think this is so great...Well the last verse anyways....I think it is a wonderful and powefully descriptive way of showing how nimble and agile she can be...While not giving up stealth at all...And well like I've said before..I can't believe somebody of your age can already be writing so brilliantly.