The Warrior

Beware the warrior,

 

She is mad,

She is precise,

She is a tiger,

And she will have no mercy.

 

Her knife shines like ice,

Her hair dark like night,

Her feet fall softly,

Her hands fall hard.

 

In the wind she flows,

Dancing with the leaves,

The light dappling on her skin,

She fools you.

 

Author's Note

I got this published! I'm really happy!

Reviews

[C. Rose]

Like the repetition
Like the comparison of feet and hands. Well done.

Nice ending "she fools you" :)

I recommend a larger font.

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid one...Thank you for sharing...:)

[The Nude Writer]

So cool :) I love this! Is it Hunger Game's themed? I know nothing of the books or movie :) But I plan to some day :)

[emilythestrange]

No ☺ I wrote this before I read The Hunger Games 😉 It is about a Celtic warrior woman called Lilliard 😍 She fought against Henry the Eighth 😘

[The Nude Writer]

Ahhhh.. fantastic :)

[emilythestrange]

😝

[BL]

Short sharp and punchy and you got a lot out, good story included too, I liked it

[emilythestrange]

Thank you

[fiery-san]

Good job. Short and simple but it was enough to convey a message and strike the soul of the reader. ^_^

[emilythestrange]

Thank you

[Tai Ryens]

Enticing, mysterious, and the exact poem that I tend to enjoy. Well done.

[emilythestrange]

Thank you

[Irvette Dauphine]

whooa.. the one who will not i go close with..
really, ur poem here is describe the character
this is interesting n great poem :)

[emilythestrange]

Thank you

[Castonovia]

Precise and fierce, that's what I call an amazon warrior ;) Power to the girls, well penned!!!

[Cynthia Man]

I found this poem really interesting, and love the way you put the descriptions in the poem. The descriptions make this poem "real", and I love it!
Also, I love the idea of the poem!
Nice written!

[emilythestrange]

Thank you

[Fernanda]

Very nice and interesting poem. I like how you repeated the same sentence in the beginning and in the end.

[emilythestrange]

Thank you