My Haiku

Um.. Me and my parents are moving to San Diego in 7 months. To me it's like pulling out one of my lungs, or my spleen or something poetic and gory like that.

" It's an adventure! "

It is not an adventure

It is like dying

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

How wonderfully vivid this is, able to be determined not by the words strung together but rather by personal experience; in your case, permanently (I presume) moving to another location. Lovely haiku.

[emilythestrange]

Yes, permanently. It makes me sad to leave my friends- but it's the hills and the books I'll be leaving behind that hurts the most( don't tell my buddy that though)

[emilythestrange]

And thank you