Dress Code

Sometimes that tie looks

Just like a noose 'round their necks

I don't want to hang

Author's Note

A haiku I came up with, and I wish I could just put in the last line " Like tie", but I can't!

Reviews

[The Nude Writer]

Haha.. Classic Haiku :) I had to wear a tie =P I mean.. I looked good in it, but felt like I was choking

[emilythestrange]

Thanks for reviewing 😀

[New Dawn]

Ok I really liked this - I can't write a haiku to save my life so I tend to be very impressed with those who can. You conveyed apprehension well through this write. thank you for sharing

[emilythestrange]

Thank you for reviewing

[BlueJay]

It was so easy to read, yet Haiku is the hardest genre to write (in my opinion). I love it; just my style.

[emilythestrange]

Thanks; I've always loved haiku's, and once you get into the swing of them, then their actually not that hard!

[Matty Bosox]

WOW!!! WOW!!! WOW!!! and lets see....WOW again!!! This should be on those quote a day calanders!!! You are the most amazingly interesting girl I review Emily and once again the shocker is how are you so young?!?!? You have described the robot world of society, the boring normality, the mannequin fakeness of the world, all wrapped in three absolutely brilliant and perfected lines...HOW DO YOU DO IT!?!?!?!

[emilythestrange]

Thank you, very much.... My inspiration is the High School tie, I'm just going into high school, and I don't want it to be completly like the movies!!!!! Thanks again.....

[Panda]

~smiles~ cute and dark...I like it ^-^ May sound odd, but are you on Mibba as well?

[emilythestrange]

Ummm..... No? What the fugi is Mibba?

[Panda]

Lol it's another site where you can post your poetry, etc. I admit..my writing is on many other sites XD

[emilythestrange]

Oh, ok, I'll try and get on that. Not many people read my stuff on here, so it's good I can find other sites. :D

[Panda]

I wish you the best of luck in finding a better audience!! :D

[emilythestrange]

Thank you