Numb

Numb is not a feeling
It's rock bottom
It's the end

Numb,

Is an understatement to describe my being

Death is far easier than life,

and death i shall pursue

For now,

I am numb

Reviews

[Onyx_Rayne]

Very nicely written. You speak on what so many people feel every day. After being let down and hurt, they just give up and become numb to everything.

"Numb,
Is an understatement to describe my being"

.... Love that, it says so much in just two lines.

Excellent work, thank you for sharing :)

[Miss Coral]

Concise, simple, and emotional in its absolute lack of it.
Great piece.

[Matthew Kult]

Quick, to the point. Good flow. Strong emotions. Good Work.

[Phibby Venable]

death can be easier than life, when the dreadful numbness,
you speak of here enters your life. Very fine writing!!

(my brother always says: Suicide is a permanent solution to
a temporary problem)

[Ima]

loved it ... thats all i can say =)
good job

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"Numb,
Is an understatement to describe my being"

{Exactly!!!}---i love this--great poetry!!!

james:-)