I Can Hear It

I can hear the spirit

Calling my name

 

I am not sure where to look

Other then the

Windowpane

But the only thing outside is spring

 

I am trying to trust my faith

Hoping I am just hearing things

 

I keep hearing the spirit,

But It's a seeker now

A seeker of something I don't have

 

You can see the ring on the carpet

It's a perfect circle from me walking on it

 

I would just be reading my book

But this spirit has me worked up

 

I hear the spirit again

It now wants a destination

To a place I've never been

 

The spirit

Is starting to

Change the arrangement of my house

This is starting to just make me mad

 

I am not scared anymore

 

My fear comes in only waves

Now

 

I am not going down without a fight

Author's Note

The words are underlined for a contest, I had to use those words.

Hope you liked it!!

Reviews

[Bear]

Critique: (But the only thing out side in spring) outside
(It's a prefect circle from me walking on it) It's a perfect
(I am not going down with out a fight) without

Review: This kind of writing challenge sharpens all your writing skills and brings out your creativity, I can't think of a better writing exercise. Looking at your word list and how you used them, I can only applaud your insight and how they add to your story. Paranormal is trendy so you picked a good topic, So good luck with the contest :~) Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

[Emily]

Thank you!!

[Bluefire]

This was good, I like the mistery of it.
Well done, hope you win~

[Emily]

Thank you!

[Bluefire]

You're welcome

[Photographymama921]

This is beautifullly written and I greatly enjoyed reading it.

[Emily]

Thank you!!

[SZHZIA]

"I am trying to trust my faith
Hoping I am just hearing things"

it is so fascinating piece... I love it... the above lines are heart touching.... I read again and again it... thanks for sharing...

best
szhzia

[Emily]

Thank you!!

[SZHZIA]

you are welcome....

[Nisreen]

I ser this piece more on a spirtual plane .... how fear has this circle like reaction ..... imprinting a mark in any place it exists ..... forcing one to go into a doom like cycle that brings everything down .... I enjoyed this one

[Emily]

Thank you!!

[stargirl23]

Good job with this, I liked the progression from fear to determination and it spoke of a universal theme:)

[Emily]

Thank you!

[Desert Rose]

"My fear comes in only waves Now"

take a bow..you just said it all..

[Emily]

Thank you!!

[Tina Kline]

Good job on this Emily.
A very chilling poem. Being haunted by a spirit that won't go.
What do do? Good horror poem. I do like it a lot.

[Emily]

Thank you!

[Tina Kline]

You are most welcome!!

[Chirag Kumar]

So well written, Emily. You're a gem! :)

[Emily]

Thank you so much!!

[Matching Socks]

Hi Emily,
I had wondered at the underlined words but I see your note. Good job using them.
This reminds me of a song called Ghost.

[Emily]

Thank you Ana!!