Find The Heart

'Find the heart that has been lost'

Find the heart that

Needs another

Find the heart

That has been hurt

Find the heart

That has been loved

But forgotten

Find the heart

That is filled with love

Find the heart

That can give the

Love

Find the heart

That needs you 

Too 

Author's Note

Hope you liked it!

Reviews

[jemaral]

simple and strong.. a search for the thing that we end up needing at some point.. for me it tells the story of the human hearts journey to find something its always been looking for... the change of subject per stanza tells me that what we think we are looking changes.. The first and last stanzas similar meaning is the the primary point of the piece for me... We may believe that what we look for changes but when i comes down to it we as human as we are just want to be needed... This is a beautiful piece.

[Emily]

Thank you so much!!

[Tai Ryens]

Simple piece that urges the reader to pursue their other half in the world, it distinctly reminds me of the Greek story about Zeus splitting humans into halves. If you haven't heard about the tale, I highly recommend you read up on it; it is quite enchanting.

[Emily]

I'll look it up, thanks!

[Scott Metro]

They are laying around like cord wood...so many hurt and broken hearts.
Enjoyed it.
Scott

[Emily]

Glad you liked it!

[Confuser]

I did like it, I loved it. Such a lovely sweet poem that leaves me smiling! The way you wrote it was very clever too ....find a broken heart and mend each others. Thank you. Dale

[Emily]

Thank you Dale!!

[Confuser]

You are welcome. Keep writing.

[prince digbani]

off to the road in search of a broken heart to touch. nice one. just a little error in line 11"that can give the love"

[Emily]

Thanks for telling me that!

[prince digbani]

Your welcome

[sona]

Title was able to capture my interest .
Good work !!

[Emily]

Thank you Sona!

[armin]

nice work Emily I enjoyed it ,sounded lyrical.
Title is even more impressive 'Find the heart'.

armin. ...

[Emily]

Thank you!!!!

[Lizardo]

This could be like thread to help people who have really broken heart and are trying to be good.
Well thought poem, I enjoyed the repetition of ''Find the heart''
Great work

[Emily]

Thanks Lizardo!

[Lizardo]

You are welcome