Moon Or Sun?

It's more of a song than anything. But it explains the feelings I feel almost everyday. I hop eyou guys enjoy and let me know what you think!

There's a feeling inside I gotta let it show.

There's the thought in my head you really show know.

I've gotta let it out, I've gotta take a stand.

Gotta make the right choice, gotta choose the right man.

So im sittin here thinkin about "which one could it be?"

It goes through my mind each day, so we'll just wait and see.

I don't know what to do anymore.

But I try to get it just right, that I know for sure.

Could it be the moon, or maybe even the sun.

I'll just keep trying till I find the one.

I don't wanna choose wrong, I wanna make the right choice.

I don't wanna be fake, so please here my voice.

I wanna tell you my feelings.

I really really do.

I don't wanna be the other girl.

I wanna be with you.

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Second best is never a place we desire to be with we care for someone. A excellent poem. Could feel questions and emotions in your words.
Coyote

[xXx]

wow .. that's really powerfully open .. great self exposure where all the conveyance magic exists .. really awesome :)

[Dillon Cotter]

This is beautiful. True emotion and real feelings. A great comparrison of Moon and Sun.

-Will

[Tears Forgotten]

This is good.. it has a good rythme..