Strangers Coliide.

Strangers Collide

we're all ready to burst hearts,
steady your breathing so you don't fall,
across the world you are hoping for the emotion to fly up,
scattering oh,
bring me the life i anticipated,
the hands to give me love, penetrate your happiness
with my grace,
(the presence of myself)

as you lie there looking into my eyes,
regardless of where you are founded,
we feel the emotions as if the two of us are one,
when i see you i feel the tremble in my veins for the feelings i have,
i may be a stranger,
but my happiness penetrates with your grace

Author's Note

My newest friend, Will Hatch on writerscafe, and I wrote this together. And I must say that he is such an amazing writer, so I give him most of the credit since it was his idea! Please look at his work, he is so great at what he does! Thank you....

Reviews

[lizzy]

that is tooooo good i can so relate to it goood job my love

[Lilly]

loved this piece so much - great work - really beautiful

[Tiff-AH!-knee�]

wow. this is good. good job will hatch :)

[mattavelli]

liked the first line. the rest is weird. Is "penetrate" the right word?

[Dillon Cotter]

Wow, You wrote pretty good with me honestly. I'm glad to be able to share a piece of writing for the viewers to see. Emily, keep up the great work. Your seriously becoming a awesome writer with emotion and passion! Thanks again!