When I see you.

Again, the guy I envy and love to write about.

When I see you in the hall it hurts.

When I see you in my mind I can't even start to identify.

When I see you here or there my stomach feels full.

When I see you near or far I wish I hadn't ate that bagel.

When I see you with her I cry.

When I see you alone, you cry.

When I see you in your class, I just wish time would pass.

When I see you it breaks my heart, to know that we fell apart.

When I see you, I miss you.

Reviews

[Nicole]

Awh, this is short and cute.
I really liked the last line:
"When I see you, I miss you."
Touched my heart. xDD
Good job.

[Theresa]

Very moving. In the beginning you think its a crush you are watching from afar but then when you go further into it you read:
"When I see you it breaks my heart, to know that we fell apart."
Full of emotion, you make the reader feel your pain. Nicely done. Thanks for sharing.