Fallin for you?

I wrote this awhile ago, but decided to put it on anyway....it's not my best but it's something. I wrote it to someone very special to me, they don't know it but I envy them for all they have done! He inspires me to write about him. And I hope you enjoy!

I'm going crazy without you
Lost my mind and don't know what to do
Baby I want you with all my heart
Cause I just can't stand It when we're apart

I know It kinda seems soon
But babe ya gotta know, I'm In love with you
Maybe you feel the same way
And there's so much more I wanna say

I really can't explain this feeling
I just hope that I'm still breathing
If you were here I know what you'd say
Just spread your wings and fly away
I'm fallin' for you
Ya It's gotta be true
I really don't know why
But all we can do is try

You put me in a trance
So I guess I'll give you a chance
I never thought you'd be the one
Until the moon went down and and there was the sun

I really can't explain this feeling
I just hope that I'm still breathing
If you were here I know what you'd say
Just spread your wings and fly away
I'm fallin' for you
Ya It's gotta be true
I really don't know why
But all we can do is try

Reviews

[shane]

i like =] very nice

[Lilly]

this is so full of emotion and well written - love it :)

[Theresa]

A beautiful write full of emotion. I really like the lines:
"You put me in a trance
So I guess I'll give you a chance"
It's romantic and sweet. I also really like how you repeat:
"If you were here I know what you'd say
Just spread your wings and fly away"
The words flow together perfectly. Nicely done. Thanks for sharing.

[Courtney Elizabeth]

A love this one. its wicked good. I didn't even know you were a writer! its truly amazing. keep up the good work :) (: