questions for the next one.

simply out: questions for the next boyfriend...

What if I let my hair grow limp and dull

What if I smiled without my heart

What if my eyes lost their shimmer

What if I decided I no longer cared

 

What if I told you I take back every word

What if I told you I’ve lied all along

What if I told you “You never made me smile”

What if I told you we were through

 

Would you still love me like you do today

Would you still want me like yesterday

Would you still care if I lived or died

Would you still be there when I cried?

Reviews

[The Flawed]

In a perfect world the answer to these questions would be “yes”
But in all truth, the answer is “NO”
But hay, what do I know?
Well done, good poem.

[Labtoad]

I love this...I feel like there is pain from a lost love and the questions maybe are still for that person? Regardless, it's beautiful...

[poetic soul]

test of true love eh?
i guess, these questions though hurt deeply, are the test of true love that we all need to go thru...coz if love has reasons, answers to these will make the love fly outta the window!!!
very well written!!!!

[reminder]

Honest, raw feelings.Very intense pacing. I like the mood it creates. Well done!