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How do I tell you my feelings when I don’t even know who you are?

Everybody says that I’m crazy, but I don’t think I can stop this obsession.

 

I hide behind a mask, too afraid to tell you who I am.

Inside I know there’s something there, something there.

If you don’t believe me, you have every right.

 

I’ve lied to you since I can remember.

But just this once, I’m screaming the truth.

And I hope you’ll be listening.

 

I hide behind this mask, too afraid to tell you who I am.

Inside I know there’s something there, something there

What else could it be?  You’ve captured me.

How else can I say it?  You’ve enraptured my heart.

 

You have a hold

and you don’t even know

how much you mean

to me.

So don’t let go, don’t let go

of me

 of me

   of me.

       Don’t let go of me….

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[bluessadmood]

Oh yes dear ,thats art,its shameless in a way ,you tell everything about you
and i do the same,we have no fears ,we hide nothing,one thing in common
we tell beauties and ugliness and truths and some lies about us..
and we are creative in everything ,but we go so far like taking off everything in front of everyone
but we show our lovely nakedness ,of our minds,and we feel free we feel strong
we defy all laws,we tell everything so everybody learns,about beauties and make beliefs
we shine to others,even if we dont know ,they are brothers ,have no fear ,art knows no boundaries ,i feel for you ,every words
so never fear telling your truths about inner feelings and so we get high up there
fearing nothing and feeling so creative..you captured my heart ,i captured yours
you enraptured mine and i enraptured yours..thats the beauty of arts
lovely write..

[FallenWingz]

writing is such an amazing thing to have becos in it we tell the truth...we never know it until we see it on paper..we open doors and alleys that lies so deep that subconscious rip it out an dlay it out for us to reveal what truly lies behind those closed doors..

[Ian]

Oh... I can relate to this...
That's my story... I just don't know... how to tell her or if I should d it...
But I know that's not going to work... and she's with someone else...
Anyway... I really like this it's a great piece... Wonderful job!
(Sorry it took me so long to read it)

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This was powerful, surely very powerful and strong but indeed a very personal piece of writing...
You have written it from your heart and that too so effortlessly!
Great work :)

[wolfsshadow25]

wow this was very nice who is about