Invisible Chemistry

You look at me when

you think I don’t notice.

But, take another glance

and you’ll see me, staring back.

I can’t decipher

the lovely look in your eyes.

Is it love?

Is it lust?

Or maybe fear?

Part of me hopes it's desire.

I don’t know if you can read me,

But here I am, an open book.

My eyes are screaming:

“Want me like I want you.”

My head is yelling

“Don’t be afraid to converse.”

But I’m so unsure of myself.

And I’m so unsure of you.

I can only hope these silent

flirtations continue.

Because you eyes are the only things

Helping me keep my heart safe.

 

Author's Note

Just tell me what you honestly think....

Reviews

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This is so raw and emotional.
I mean, the flow was indeed flawless and I read it so effortlessly...
"But I'm so unsure of myself.
And I'm so unsure of you." - The best lines according to me from the piece.
I honestly think that this is one of your best work by far I've ever read...
Brilliant piece of writing!
Great work :)

[lindsay]

I feel like I am reading your mind more than anything. I loved this. Great job.

[Ian]

I can relate this...
Wonderful piece... feeling well expressed...
I feel pretty familiar to this poem...
Great job!

[wolfsshadow25]

there some grammar errors but it was good