These Tears

Just another poem....

Here they come, falling again.

Will you help them stop?

Wipe them away, wipe them away.

Kiss my cheeks so they’ll stoop falling.

Don’t entice them with your words.

Why do you look at me that way?

I can already here the words you’ll say.

Despite my pain, you yell them once more.

And here they come, falling again.

 

Author's Note

just tell me what you think....

Reviews

[Ian]

I like this a lot...!
Though it's pretty short... I think I would totally love it if it was a bit larger...
But it's ok as it is... Pretty sad but really good... besides Ilove sad stuff! don't know why though...
There is a feeling in this poem... it's really good
Great job! (If you can, please make it larger, it would make an even greater piece, sorry if I annoy too much about it, hahaha XD)
Thanks for sharing! Send me anything whenever you want, you're very talented.

[Kilala]

Wow that was great it means so much

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Despite my pain, you yell them once more.
And here they come, falling again.


This line really touched me, it is so beautifully sad and so very well penned!
Very thoughtful indeed.

[Laura Ex]

this is so pretty. and sad ]:
i like how the tears sound uncontrollable and unstoppable, almost natural. it's so sad to think that no one will stop them . D: