You Are My Song

Wonder love

You are the words in my song

You are the melody

You are the harmony

You are the reason I'll sing

The song that you gave to me

Now I return to you

You are the song that I sing

The song touches my heart

You are the one touching me

When I dance to the tunes

You play my love like a flute

Oh How wonderful is this love

When you are so close to my heart

And I just can't get you out of my head

You are my song

You are

Reviews

[Patricia Wedel]

Gentle persuasion... you play my heart like a flute.... so very romantic... truly, Pat

[Mirror]

Thank you Pat. :-)

[barleygirl]

This is so beautiful & lyrical, I can feel it as a song. The sentiments are simply-stated, but that makes it sound so earnest, along with a slight bit of repetition of ideas, using different ways to show each time, & this adds to the way your song has an almost pleading tone, like persuasion or seduction (((HUGS))) fondly, Margie

[Mirror]

Right, you are Marg!!! Thank you so much. I appreciate it.

[Einstein Noodle]

lovely sentiments and mood in your poem Mirror ...a wonderful love .. V2 L1 small typo perhaps ..touches .. instead of "touch"
"You Are My Song" speaks to my youth and an idealism that life forges some real into it ;)
a real feel good read for me
E.

[Mirror]

Oh, thank you for the correction. I will quickly work on it. And yes, that youth feeling right.." :-) got your vibe. *Winks*

[Einstein Noodle]

:) ................

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful and hopeful words shared. I liked the energy and the hope in the words. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Mirror]

Thank you Coyote, you've been a great reviewer and encourage me so much. thank you.

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked this one and you are welcome.

[Haneefah]

A poem with great words and could become a song with great lyrics.
Nice piece Mirror!

[Mirror]

Thank you Hanee... I appreciate your view. Thank you.

[Cassie]

How about now you put a tune to the words and make a real song, this is beautiful

[Mirror]

Cas, thank you! I thought of that, but how do I start? Thanks for the encouragement...:-)

[Matthew Kult]

Do love a romantic tune. Slowly playing with gentle and smooth touches. Sometimes I want it to be hard rock, heavy metal with the heavy loud slamming.

Always and with love,

Jayden D.

[Mirror]

Yes, Jay. I had tunes in my head while writing this piece. Thank you for stopping by. I appreciate.

[Matthew Kult]

You are welcome

Matthew

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Wonderfully romantic and intensely sensual. You have a rhythm that make words have impact.

[Mirror]

Thank you John for stopping by.....! :-)