TONIGHT

I came home

once again

I found myself all alone

Once again

I went to the kitchen

Pots, Knives, and Kettles

All in a mess

Even then my hunger abandoned me

Sinking my desires with me

I forced myself a bath

Unwillingly pull on my nightie

And moved to shut the door

Once on my bed without duvet

The cold i will endure tonight

The room dark and bled

With silence only Samson can break

Oh! with a soft sigh I realized

That that is not the only thing Samson can break

Yes, tonight

Yes, My heart

Yes, Samson, my sleep.

Author's Note

The shrill memories of a broken heart.

Reviews

[Raghib]

The poem can have some optimism in it . Like she could have known Samson isnt worth the pain in her or that she should leave the past behind and live a new one .
The story has a tint of frustation in it that i loved . I dont knkw about others but i felt that anger dwelling inside that girl .

[Mirror]

Raghib dear, how true. From the girl's eye, she is frustrated and i couldn't cover it up in my writing even though i feel what you say about optimism is true. The poem can have optimistic side and make Samson not worth the stress but i was writing it from her feelings. Besides, we can never tell the condition that caused the breakup in the first place and no reason given to her to move on. It just revolved about her present feelings...

[Mirror]

And thank you for the beautiful review.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

so beautiful and straight from the heart :D

[Mirror]

Thank you Pragati. Thanks so much. you review means a lot

[RebeccaRose]

So simple, so bleak, I feel this all too well. Bravo

[Mirror]

Thank you Rose. I appreciate your review so much.

[RebeccaRose]

Don't you dare even mention it. Any time. I personally believe that constructive criticism is the mold for art's existence. Without it, we would all be lost.

[Mirror]

yes dearest friend. True, every word. All writers should brace up to get it if they want to grow.

[AYVID N]

Such a vivid scene to imagine. Domestic chaos and in the midst of it emotional chaos in darkness and silence. How we long for that presence! So finely written and expressed, my friend!

[Mirror]

Thank you, DIVYA. You are the best too! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A very sad journey in these words. You made the reader feel every step. I liked the use of the description. I liked the ending my friend. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Mirror]

Thank you very much, Coyote. Your review always means a lot to me.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.