oh what a keeper says i! loved saying/praying your poem/song just to cry Abba/Father in the spirit of gratitude and love is what we all need all day everyday ... i am imagining your choir singing this one for sure ... thanks for sharing your expressions of Faith
E.
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7 Years Ago
Thank you Einstein. God bless you my dear friend.... Thank you for the encouraging review.
oh what a keeper says i! loved saying/praying your poem/song just to cry Abba/Father in the spirit of gratitude and love is what we all need all day everyday ... i am imagining your choir singing this one for sure ... thanks for sharing your expressions of Faith
E.
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Thank you Einstein. God bless you my dear friend.... Thank you for the encouraging review.
The weight carrier God
The great leaning wall
The great confidant
My great hall of fame
These are my most favorite lines though the poem in entirety is an awesome tribute to the Lord. These verses could be my soul magnifying the Lord. Holy Holy Holy and blessed is His Name. Thank you for such uplifting poetry!
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Thank you, Divya. I will edit it ma'am. Thanks plenty :)
This is well written friend ! Stanzas 3&4 respectively got me fused to the realm of the spirit in true worship of 'The weight carrier God
The great leaning wall
The great confidant
My great hall of fame' Indeed, it's a poem of praise & worship for whom He is & for His awesome acts. It's captivating !
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7 Years Ago
Ike... Thank you. He is my Ebubedike. My Eze. Thank you for inspirational review......
This is well written as it has a feel that transcends just one religion. Like I felt like I was speaking in the echoes of Valhalla at the banquet addressing the Gods, I felt the purity of having a conversation on my knees at a chapel on the hill. It felt personal, it was a voice from the heart to something greater than me.
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7 Years Ago
Really, keeD. Tell me about Valhalla, Chapel on the hill, and your religion. Those words sound like .. read moreReally, keeD. Tell me about Valhalla, Chapel on the hill, and your religion. Those words sound like a great title.
I am simple, easy going, moody at times, but very playful sometimes i don't recognize myself. what i know is that in those playful times, everyone want to be like me. Yet, behind the curtains of my sm.. more..