Promises made in the dark, forever long ago told me,
It was written in the stars that I would want you
Before you ever wondered in front of my eyes,
The missing twin flame inside of me started burning, the
moment I seen into your crystal brown eyes
Yes it was written that I would always love you, Man they
got me hypnotized
What did the rushing waters take away love,
Mí Vída; Open up, Your heart, let me see
Sailing away below the fire moon an amethyst skylines
Let the evenin breeze tell you, along purple blue wine dark
oceans, what I never could make you see,
Je t’ aime, Ma chérie ; Your on my mind an I carry a Love
for you,
Look me in the eye, an it spreads through the heart an mind
girl,
Take my hand, let me hold you, Bésame; let your kiss be the
one that’s destined to let me breathe, And cast me in the crystal fire, darlin
set my soul free;
Open up, your heart, today’s a hope of deliverance from
yesterday, Cariño, let tomorrow
be,
Moët; Take my love out to you, an take some time to breathe,
Belle amie; give the mind time to think, When I’m not
there, would you think of times with me,
My Loves Sailin out on
the wine dark ocean sea
Am naturally drawn to you Sweet darlin’, Can you measure in
the love felt for you, an give the heart its time to breathe
wolf,
This poem is very mystical in flavor.. alluding to soul mate, and destiny..painting your image with the ocean of alcohol and the fire moon in amethyst skies.. this poem is of course referencing wine but that could be so many levels of "wine" hell communion we drink grape juice let this be my blood...so I think this poem can be read literally and enjoy the face value of a love poem for a flesh and blood lover. And also another interpretation on a more spiritual, mystical union.
great write, well intrigued with the images and the message and the beauty
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Hell my friend; Yes, this is about alluding to the illusion of o' Soul Mate... It is a Real letter t.. read moreHell my friend; Yes, this is about alluding to the illusion of o' Soul Mate... It is a Real letter that written for a woman... She is half French an Half Mexican, hehehe... Moet is her name, er, last name me thinks... One of the feelings that she makes me think of is, since cant make any sense of why I cant get her out of me head an thoughts like I have been, so out of curiosity I looked it up/// Accordin to Astrology, she is the most destined for me to be with, which I thought, well, right on, groovy I guess... Then, the more that I got to know her, she invoked Great feelings of love in me... One of my most happy thoughts in my life was sailin to Catalina Island, at night, or later in the day, when it started to get late, I noted that out there on the ocean, the sky looked purplish, kinda like amethyst an that the ocean waves comin up at me as I looked over the railing looked purple an bluish, kinda like a dark wine... Since her name is Moet, an I drink her in me like the fine wine that she is, according to the stars, she is the one destined to be with me... Really, though, the wine is all coincident, as it fits in to the story... Hehehe,
This poem is just packed with emotion, which is a very good thing. It's written well, and I love the style of how it is written. It's a wonderful poem about love, and you portray it in a dream like fashion that I really like. Nice job!
wolf,
This poem is very mystical in flavor.. alluding to soul mate, and destiny..painting your image with the ocean of alcohol and the fire moon in amethyst skies.. this poem is of course referencing wine but that could be so many levels of "wine" hell communion we drink grape juice let this be my blood...so I think this poem can be read literally and enjoy the face value of a love poem for a flesh and blood lover. And also another interpretation on a more spiritual, mystical union.
great write, well intrigued with the images and the message and the beauty
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Hell my friend; Yes, this is about alluding to the illusion of o' Soul Mate... It is a Real letter t.. read moreHell my friend; Yes, this is about alluding to the illusion of o' Soul Mate... It is a Real letter that written for a woman... She is half French an Half Mexican, hehehe... Moet is her name, er, last name me thinks... One of the feelings that she makes me think of is, since cant make any sense of why I cant get her out of me head an thoughts like I have been, so out of curiosity I looked it up/// Accordin to Astrology, she is the most destined for me to be with, which I thought, well, right on, groovy I guess... Then, the more that I got to know her, she invoked Great feelings of love in me... One of my most happy thoughts in my life was sailin to Catalina Island, at night, or later in the day, when it started to get late, I noted that out there on the ocean, the sky looked purplish, kinda like amethyst an that the ocean waves comin up at me as I looked over the railing looked purple an bluish, kinda like a dark wine... Since her name is Moet, an I drink her in me like the fine wine that she is, according to the stars, she is the one destined to be with me... Really, though, the wine is all coincident, as it fits in to the story... Hehehe,
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