The Two Lovers, One Heart, None Others

She takes me down to a secret World, known only to us,  
A secret path only she knows how to get to...  
She can find me, an pull me back when she wants to,  
 I want to travel there with her, I want to travel blindly  
Secret paths of the heart an mind she finds,  
I need her to Love me, I need her to stay  
I pull her close to me as  I lean in, an whisper in her ear  
 words only meant for her to ever hear  
“Lovers an Friends Forever we are, destined to Love each other,as you have always been my lover, Two Lovers, one heart, an none others day by day”  
You have my mind an all my thoughts,  
My Heart from me you taked,  
From you I don’t want to be released  
Take from me my innocence, you take from me my pain  
Mí Vída, Amor, with all of my Strength, unto the half of my

Reviews

[Violet's Run]

eddie this is very passionate and spicy. it is off balance but I like it.. When poem or a lyric is off balance it sets it apart and as long as it works in the piece to enhance it I like that.. and itdoes.. Art imitates life.. we are not perfect and in our hearts we do not even love or hate perfectly..so why write .. that way '''there is perfection in the irregularity.
susan

[Eddie M deadwolf]

Hello my friend, it is written how I talk, voice to voice... You see, this was an ALMOST word for word convo, with one a woman girl, that met, we were on the phone for hours, an she asked me how I feel about us, an her, an these were the words that just came out of me, when am talkin, voice to voice, it kinda comes out cluttered, like a nervous boy talkin to a Beauty, Yeah, get dumb an tongue tied, even FORGOT my name 4 times in my Life when gorgeous lady approached me, BUT, but in All fairness, one of them was Cindy Crawford, an I was about 16 standin in line to get her autograph, when It came my turn, I forgot my own Dam name, an my sister had to talk for me, hehehe...