Ooh how I wept, every time that you’re gone away, and how I weep, every time that you come back my way, like a child I’m lost every day, Don’t wanna say good bye, But look at the way you make me cry, Don’t say your to blame, but look how you made me this way, Baby I don’t wanna stay, but look at the way you make me shake. Burning with fire, you make me burn myself away, Cold with pain, like a day without the sun when you take your love away mmm- an then you give it away to another man. Light in the dark, you make me lost and then you make me found, Lost in your ways, build me up and then you bring me down. Lost and then found, when I look into your eyes you make me this way Could you ever set me free, would I try and leave I carry this feeling, bitter an blue, feelings so fragile, left scarred an hollow My chains run deep and cut with each word shatter Left Bitter an blue
I was just listening to Tesla Love Song when I started reading this and again it is funny how thigs are
conpatible and such.. The rock ballad sound would be perfect and I can hear a jager or a aerosmith, or a
sammy hagar HAHA maybe cat stevens.. yeah he is petty cool diferent sound thought,, maybe joe cocker that would be cool anyway I love the direction your stuff is going the words are getting likearrows to the readers heart,
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10 Years Ago
Ah, Cat Stevens an Joe Cocker, Great names my friend, for some reason, I been very much into Eric Bu.. read moreAh, Cat Stevens an Joe Cocker, Great names my friend, for some reason, I been very much into Eric Burden, an paul Rodgers of Bad Company lately, little Van Morrison, This one, this one was one of me Very first ones ever written, even before deepunderground, about 5 years ago maybe: wolf
I was just listening to Tesla Love Song when I started reading this and again it is funny how thigs are
conpatible and such.. The rock ballad sound would be perfect and I can hear a jager or a aerosmith, or a
sammy hagar HAHA maybe cat stevens.. yeah he is petty cool diferent sound thought,, maybe joe cocker that would be cool anyway I love the direction your stuff is going the words are getting likearrows to the readers heart,
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Ah, Cat Stevens an Joe Cocker, Great names my friend, for some reason, I been very much into Eric Bu.. read moreAh, Cat Stevens an Joe Cocker, Great names my friend, for some reason, I been very much into Eric Burden, an paul Rodgers of Bad Company lately, little Van Morrison, This one, this one was one of me Very first ones ever written, even before deepunderground, about 5 years ago maybe: wolf
Tucson Arizona, Like in the BEATLE Song Get Back , AZ
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