Aww, I liked this a lot! Music is such a significant part of my life, and I thought that you did an exceptional job in capturing that magic that I experience on a daily basis. I really liked the concept behind this poem, with music being the 'mother', 'father', 'best friend', and 'lover', as it was something that I had never come across before, yet was able to understand and relate to it wholeheartedly. In a way, I wish you had split the one large stanza up into several stanzas, as I think this would have made it a lot easier to read and look at visually. Other than that though, I really enjoyed this! The last stanza was the perfect way to some up what music is. :) Nice work,
~PaperHearts
Very true. Listening to music can be medicinal, especially music that takes you back to your youth, to the the good 'ol days, or just uplifts you with encouraging lyrics. It occupies a lonely mind. I agree, I like this true, well-written write. Thanks for sharing it!
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