The Invisible

And this is who I am.

 Everyone walks right pass her;

 talking, laughing, telling each other silly jokes,

  but no one ever says "Hi" nor invite this girl.

She's invisible;

 she could stand in a corner

  and stay there for hours unnoticeable. 

She's invisible;

 no one dares to talk to her,

  no one even dares to look at her.

She's invisible

 and no one cares.

But here I am

 looking at her

  inside this four-sided mirror

   and I can see her crystal clear.

Author's Note

reviews are highly appreciated :)

Reviews

[DaughterNature]

I hate to burst your bubble, but I'm not sure you got your wording right. Invisible is when someone or something cannot be seen or isn't noticed by anyone else, whereas invincible is when someone or something cannot be destroyed or broken (like Superman). I think it would be great if the character in the poem is invincible against the rude and hurtful things that people say about her, but I think you may have meant that she is invisible since everyone walks past without noticing her.

[EMA]

oh yeah. didn't realized that mistake. thanks for correcting. :)