A Friend's Plea

still waiting for you.. a friendship that lasted for years SHOULDN'T be broken by misunderstanding...

A friend's Plea
A little love that slowly
grows and grows
not once that comes and goes
that's all i ask of you.
a sunny day to look up to the sky
a hand to help me by
that's all i ask of you.
don't let me down
o show me that you care
remember when you give
you also get a share.
don't let me down
i have no time to wait
tomorrow might not come
by then may be too late

Reviews

[deeps]

This is a really wonderful write here and flows wonderful.

[Art Sun]

nice...frienship is one of the most rewarding and most seeked after emotional tie with another...your poem reflects both...

enjoyed reading and reviewing this poem...

[jenny]

this is very true and funny enough i am going through this with someone at the moment and you did really well at displaying this feeling

[alison13]

cute.. is this base on a real experience? well, i just read the description, and it seems like it.. great job.. :)

[apocalypse]

a really sweet write..honest and innocent expression..Good work. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and sweet poem. Slow and easy. We need to enjoy the joy and tenderness of love. A excellent poem.
Coyote