He is the Keeper

 

 

Where’s the guy who will not hurt me

Because of a little bruised ego

 

Show me the man who will listen to what I have to say

 No matter how ridiculous

And smile at me each and every day

 

The one who will fight for his right to love me

But without fists

 

The one who will notice each frown

And try his best to make me smile

 

The guy who will unlock the real me

 

The guy with the power to set me free

 

He, the keeper of the key to the place

That leads to me

Author's Note

just something that popped into my head in the shower i almost lost it...i should keep paper and a pencil in the shower heheh it's a little crappy but whatever.

Reviews

[carnifex]

this poem is pretty awesome :)
I'm sure many people feel the same way as you do.
Dont worry. he will come eventually
=]

[Emunah June.]

I like it very much. A great story. A god pastime and true happening. Wonderful. I want to subscribe to this writer!!

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Crappy? I think NOT. Most definitely a great poem, filled with a longing for what you deserve.

[Wildecat]

All good things take time and your time will indeed come, nice write.

[Gravedigger]

We are few and far between, but just keep looking and trying and you will find him. You know though, if he is really a guy with all of this, he will come to you because of who you are. thats one good way to tell if he really wants YOU and is not simply wanting SOMEONE...and I've tried paper and pencil in the shower and it doesn't work..I use dry erase board and marker, facing away from the water. It really works, try it!!!

[QuietPoet]

This is beautiful..

He is out there! I know it. I found mine, just keep looking and you will find yours.

[Whitney]

Oh this is beautiful! I love it so much!
I can relate to as well.

Not crappy at all!

Good thing you didn't lose the thought!

Keep up the great work!