the wretched tea spoon
A Poem by
unspokenguilt
uh its...
Tea spoon
What makes this spoon more special then the others?
Can’t I use a table spoon instead
Why do certain things call for a certain spoon?
If I could hate a spoon with out seeming crazy
The tea spoon would be it
A spoon for tea…
I’d rather use my finger
It just comes more naturally
I can’t believe I’m writing a poem about a spoon so I’ll stop while I’m ahead
Now for forks…where do I began?
© 2008 unspokenguilt
Author's Note
i dont know what i was thinking but here you go
Reviews
Ha ha ha, interesting poem I actually quite enjoyed this. I normally don't read poetry, but this just popped out at me. Good job.
Posted 16 Years Ago
LOL, this was delightful. Wasn't it fun this contest, just goes to show
one can write about anything if one puts their mind to it!!
I enjoyed this....good luck in the contest.
~ Helena :)
Posted 16 Years Ago
LOL, this was delightful. Wasn't it fun this contest, just goes to show
one can write about anything if one puts their mind to it!!
I enjoyed this....good luck in the contest.
~ Helena :)
this is cute! its nice and light and humorous, it made me smile. kudos! you should definitely think about writing one about forks, you could add it to the end of this one like a continuation. :)
Posted 16 Years Ago
this is cute! its nice and light and humorous, it made me smile. kudos! you should definitely think about writing one about forks, you could add it to the end of this one like a continuation. :)
I like it. Witty and unassuming, ironic in a way. The flow is excellent, until you hit the second stanza, where it stutters a little bit. Is there supposed to be a rhyme scheme in stanza two? It's just something personal, but it bugs me when certain parts of the poem rhyme, and others don't. It's not of any real significance to the overall value and meaning of the poem, but I'm just curious...
I like it, but stanza two is just really bugging for some unexplainable reason.
Posted 16 Years Ago
I like it. Witty and unassuming, ironic in a way. The flow is excellent, until you hit the second stanza, where it stutters a little bit. Is there supposed to be a rhyme scheme in stanza two? It's just something personal, but it bugs me when certain parts of the poem rhyme, and others don't. It's not of any real significance to the overall value and meaning of the poem, but I'm just curious...
I like it, but stanza two is just really bugging for some unexplainable reason.
you're too cute unspokenguilt! so right, how does one thing begin so specialized,
great phylosophical questions in something so concrete, ---x mishy :S
Posted 16 Years Ago
you're too cute unspokenguilt! so right, how does one thing begin so specialized,
great phylosophical questions in something so concrete, ---x mishy :S
Hahaha! This is FABULOUS! I love it! Really, it should be called the coffee spoon, I mean, we are a society of coffee drinkers, not so much, tea.
I agree with DrewBerry . . . I'm for using the fingers, too!
Cute one . . . a great way to start the day!
Posted 16 Years Ago
Hahaha! This is FABULOUS! I love it! Really, it should be called the coffee spoon, I mean, we are a society of coffee drinkers, not so much, tea.
I agree with DrewBerry . . . I'm for using the fingers, too!
Cute one . . . a great way to start the day!
Bravo! Bravo!
I'm for using the fingers as well. Damned be the Teaspoon!
Posted 16 Years Ago
Bravo! Bravo!
I'm for using the fingers as well. Damned be the Teaspoon!
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Added on October 6, 2008
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