but i had to tell you

but i had to tell you

A Poem by unspokenguilt
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basically it's about a girl who's getting married and her best friend can't be happy for her cause he loves her...he just didn't know it

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He’s out of reach…
He’s in my grasp
 
I can’t believe he told you that
 
He’s here for me
He’s at my side
 
He couldn’t mean his future bride
 
I’ve got his ring and him my soul
 
That’s the price you’ll pay
That’ll be your toll
 
Just smile for me
And believe its right
 
So sorry I can’t at least not tonight
 
Don’t be like this
It’s what I want
 
And what of me, don’t I count?
 
You, you’re my friend…
 
Oh you figured that out
 
Why are you stressing?
What are you not saying?
 
Why him?
 
Don’t.
 You never wanted me before
 What changed now?
 
It has always been a thought of mine
Always at the back of my mind
 
Why now why not before?
What kind of fool do you take me for?
 
You are no fool, you’re smart…I guess
To stick with me wouldn’t be the best
 
I’ve got nothing to give, but this heart of mine
And it’s already stained marked by the pain
 
And soon a hole will form a hole were I would of kept you
 
If only I was quick enough to let it be known:
 
Oh, yes it’s true…I’m in love with you!

© 2008 unspokenguilt


Author's Note

unspokenguilt
I was bored and this came out it's not real good, but I couldn't just erase it.

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I liked it. It was interesting, and I love how it was somewhat like a dialogue. I could really feel the emotion in this piece. Good job!

Posted 16 Years Ago


I feel pity for the friend...i had one of those....in fact he went hunting the day I got married....he never told me congratulations....it is still sad to this day! Cheers,lea

Posted 16 Years Ago


I like this. Very creative. Pretty good for something that just came out. :)

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on September 29, 2008

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