a random thought

lets just say i had a scare...

 

If you weren't ready for my reaction

then why'd u tell me?

why wouldn't i care?!

it's not like i'm selfish

i give and they take

though its a selfish way to go.

to unload it on me then leave?

a promise is a promise so this one keep

just cause it seems that no ones there

 it doesnt mean that no one cares

so i may not know u as good as they do

but i could probably love u if u let me, dude

in the end its your choice to make

don't make it brief

take your chance to think

please...don't do what your thinking

...

live!

Reviews

[WV_Poetess]

You certainly packed a lot of emotion into those few lines. I think you should continue to write and continue to explore the interaction that goes on between people. Always remember, whether anyone else ever reads your work at the moment it's written or not, it will benefit someone else eventually and at the moment you write it, you have cleared your thoughts and your heart. Thank you for allowing me to read your work.

Dianna