the arson's love

short and brief

 

The Arson’s Love

 

A painting lost in my mind

The images are vivid and flawless

 

The colors burn, anew

Flames dance along the edges

 

It’s…burning

 

I watch in a daze as we stumble and fall,

 

But

 

It’s too late to put it out

 

Perhaps my most loved and hated one too,

Is the one that burns of me and you.

Reviews

[NightDream]

That was really good, very dramatic and skilled. I like that it accomplishes a complete atmosphere with only a few lines. Great job!!