It Never Was me

It's more of a too short for song, but rhymes thing. I wrote it about a boy.

 

It Never Was Me

She couldn’t please you, yet you stayed.

I’d try to please you but you’re fazed.

 

I try to tell you, but you hide,

Not aware of what I felt inside.

 

Even though, she’s really gone,

I feel I’m doing something wrong.

 

Is it her, or is it me,

Could I be your somebody?

 

A simple yes, a simple no

That’s all it takes to free my soul.

 

Instead I crumble as you sigh,

every passing makes me cry.

 

I’m feeling weak, he’s feeling strong

Well guess what he’s moving on.

 

I fake a smile, you stroll along,

Our talking terms are far past gone.

Author's Note

um...what u think

Reviews

[Me]

nice

[Brianna Brie]

I fake a smile, you stroll along,
Our talking terms are far past gone.

Love that last verse...sad poetry with all the insecurities of love. Thanks for entering the Missing Him, Missing Her contest.