Ode to Deep

For weaving a tale about me so

In full must I pay you back

Since the two of us together make a whole

And the things you have, I lack

 

Polar opposites in nature, really

We really  do attract

Never seen without the other

Bound by a contract

 

With the clashing of cultural barriers

Our lives are much the same

Yet you hold true to your views

And treat it like a game

 

The anti-prep you define yourself

Bold enough not to care

While others look on in awe

And stop and gawk and stare

 

Carefree to the brink of death

Your reactions can be appalling

But amusing so, now that I've gotten to know

How you work out things

 

Deeply

Emotional

Extraordinarily

Perfect

Sarcastically

Heinous

Ingeniously

Kick-a*s

Horrendously

Awesome

 

Super

Human

Astonishingly 
Retarded
Mathematically 
Addicted

 

Best Friend :] 

Author's Note

haha i wrote this in 10 minutes in math class today for the idiot that sits in front of me ;) hahahahaha deepdeep you're my best friend for life xD narutards unite!!!!! too bad your ode is clearly better than mine :P

Reviews

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This is sweet. We all have a best friend that feels like our own flesh and blood.
I enjoyed it.

[Stephen Scaggs]

http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/8542/ I think you could add this to this writing contest. I think you'd do fairly well. :P

[DeadlySoul]

nice i like it and cool thing with making her name

[Deepshikha]

I LOVE YOU TO THE BRINK OF DEATH. :D
Narutards, lmao, those were the days!
Haha, but now I feel bad since my poem was terribly crappy, and your's so swell. >_<
But this is going into my library. XD

[A]

This was a great read. It rhymed well, had a nice rhythm, and to be plum (who says that? 0o) was very nicely written. xD

[Chamil3001]

its a nice piece of writing..
very random..

[deeps]

This is a very creative write you have done,
Very well written and protrayed!