Reflective Portico

I wrote this for a contest, hope you all enjoy it ^_^

God I want to dream again, take me where I've never been
I wanna go there, this time I'm not scared

Unbreakable - Fireflight

Amazing song  :) 

 

 my inspiration here btw ---->

Trying to hide what I always was 

Afraid to let loose, and lose control 

The hellish banging on my walls 

Darkness seeping through my soul 

And I thought I was stronger than all of this 

I thought that no one could put me down 

But you knocked me over without a kiss

 Just another person coming around 

And now all the things I've tried in vain 

Are coming out like the rising tide

And crashing here like the ever-falling rain 

And now there's nothing left to hide 

I don't really get what I was afraid of 

Fearing fear, i thought i was better than that 

But you've taught me something about this love 

Forgetting and forgiving won't do crap 

And through this life I'll go on 

Never looking back at these mistakes 

Cause I'm too good to not dwell on 

And I won't be another one of you fakes 

I'm too bold to shy away 

I'm too smart to fall for you 

I'm too quick to sit here and stay 

And let go all the things you do 

So appearances do lie, never forget 

The innocent girl you saw before 

Who might just end up making you regret 

Having tried once again to score 

so yea, there's me :) 

Reviews

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Wow..looks can be deceiving. It appears that someone has bitten off a little more than he could chew.

[Kenny L. Mitchell]

This is profound, beautiful & deep! Good work!

[Deepshikha]

Wow. This is absolutely amazing.
I'm jealous. >___

[Domo]

Great poem, I was dumbfounded at first, then I focused and read it again and found the inner beauty. Good job! ☺
~D♥m♥~

[Sseoni]

What an amazing poem! I totally agree with you! Unbreakable is a totally awesome song! Very insprational and uplifting! Wonderful poem! :D