This is Death

 

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Icy Touch

Blank Face

No Response

Unset Pace

Unbroken Silence 

Serene Eyes

Futile Words

Deceptive Lies

Sanguine Blood

Heart of Lead

Peaceful Countenance

Hatred Bred

Passing Time

Pernicious Night

Apathy

Misleading Light

Free of life

Lack of Breath

Unbeating heart

This is Death

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Reviews

[Mioki]

Hm, this was a unique view on death. Although it wasn't wordy, you were still able to get a reaction from the reader, and it had meaning. Some poems with a lot of words aren't even able to do that, so I give you kudos for getting it in there. This poem also makes the reader feel slightly fearful and cold at the same time. "What is death?" they begin to ask themselves. Well, your poem sounds what I imagine it would be like. This was a very thought enticing piece, I'm glad to have read it.

[Phenomena]

Love it! it was short and simple and love the rhyme. Awesome write!:)

[Nathan Noble]

interesting style, it flows wonderfully. great imargery also, an amazing depiction of death. this was a very good write.

[C.L. Wilson]

vivid image. lovin the short line style. very dark. almost melancholy. altogether it's great.

[Wunderlich]

This is awesome. Great flow and diction. Well done.

[Donovan "Grey Wolf" Go..]

wow its hot.it dosen't stink lol.

[Char]

So many fantastic words! A mix of darker emotions and carefully chosen adjectives :D

[J.A.Thompson]

this is great. the style is unique, and your words do flow.

great poem.

[Sseoni]

Wow! What a fantastic poem! Great use and variety of words! I loved your poem! It had a lot of emotion in it! It was beautifully written, wonderfully detailed, and greatly descriptive! Awesome poem! :D