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this is the very beginning of a short story that i will hopefully be posting chapters to. it gives a small description of the first introduced character.

   He stood at the ledge of the 50 foot escarpment on the side of his palace. He looked at his creation. His city and his code. Particularly he watched his latest build, which was a temple beyond temples...

 

  (to be continued)

Reviews

[Janice Scott]

Can't wait to read more. Sounds like it gonna be pretty interesting.

[Mary]

it sounds like anchent Egypt... but that could just be me... i'm not realy that sure...

[Cole =D]

hi...thanks for reading. the time period is kind of a secret but when i post more it will become pretty obvious.

[Lexy]

Agreeing with Kyle, when would this be set in?

Speaking of temples, they found something older than Stone Henge. I think I spelt that wrong....

I seriously can't wait for you to write more of it.

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great description

i'll surely come back to read more

(:

[Kyle]

lol1 sounds kool! just wondering, what time period would this be set in (or is it in an alternate world?)