Raging Addictions

My entry for the 'Ten Items or Less' Contest :)

I could go for chocolate, alcohol, a cigarette, or, You.

Author's Note

Just something to think about, note how I start from the least bad and the least addictive for the system and move onward...

Reviews

[Aven]

It's so simple yet so brilliant. It really says it all.

I could go for chocolate right now :D

[Alfonso Garcia]

I liked it good job.

[fireblossom]

A good poem

[Abdul Aziz]

Haha, intelligent write. You start with the least addictive, and that reflects. The poet's muse is the most addictive. But you also state that you start from the least "bad". Now that's something to think about! There are a lot of implications for this, and I like this really succinct poem very much, just for the end "punch"!
Very well done.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Wow. That ending was a knockout punch. I like how there is a feeling of chaos, but at the same time..there is a method to the madness.

[Steve]

chocolate was mentioned first!!!!! OMG I could go for chocolate before anything!

I liked this one too. You are an imaginative write although this one was a short one....it still hit the mark.