give me something

give me something

A Poem by ellieELECTRIC;
"

how i'm feeling right now

"

give me something to live for,

cause it sure as hell isn't you.

 

you're unlike any other.

and i adore you.

you're the brightest of all the stars

in my night sky

but the lights are going out

on this part of my stage.

breathe in and out.

watch the lightening flash.

i want to get this out

i'm swelling,overcome.

i need to tell you something.

i don't want to,

but i have to.

haven't really seen you lately,

i mean,

REALLY

seen you.

haven't spent those afternoons

laying beside you

talking and laughing.

maybe that's it.

i don't want to scare you,

or miss you.

 

i think i'm falling.

but falling upwards,

away,

out.

out of love

with you.

© 2008 ellieELECTRIC;


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i think i'm falling.
but falling upwards,
away,
out.
out of love
with you.


that piece gave me interesting inner images.
thanks for sharing

Posted 16 Years Ago



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ellieELECTRIC;

atwood, Canada



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i'm e-l-l-e-n. but i sometimes prefer ellie. rural ontario blows, but it's where my family and my friends are. i love music,and photography. i've been writing since i was about 7, have a couple storie.. more..

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