love

a poem i wrote for my friends project, haha.

 

Love is like

The smell after the rain

The good kind of pain

Sun and moon alike.

Love would be

Everything I’d need

Everything I’d bleed

You, and us, and me.

Loving you

Is comparable to the sunrise

And the nonexistent goodbyes

You’d get me through.

Picture love

As a shadow on the ground

Moving without a sound

Everything we think of.

Author's Note

one of my only poems with a rhyme scheme;
does it work?

Reviews

[Vesa Lee]

This is beatiful, really! I enjoyed it so much. Please write more, the world needs more poetry like yours.*smile*

[Gema]

I love this the colour i can see!
The smell and feelings this poem gives me!
It would sound very good sung!
It is very flowy and relaxing!
Very well written thank you for your poem x