Dim

Bear in mind, it is late and I wrote this literally in sixty seconds.

Dim is the light for the late believers,

Those with eyes in the sky

But only when it's lit by stars.

Dim is the light for the lost lovers,

Those with broken hands and

Stitched up hearts to mend.

Dim is you.  It is me.

It is feeling.  It is not choice.

Dim is dark, but only for the blind of heart.

Author's Note

Be honest.

Reviews

[Dr. Wood ?]

it shows that you wrote it quickly, but sometimes that is the best way, Poets FIND words from nowhere...I bet you loved the first line as it came into your head and you just went for it...But there are some great lines here...Can't expect it to be great...but there is some great stuff to work on here....I enjoyed it

[Commanda Panda]

As I read the poem I was wondering if it was a spiritual dimness or an emotional dimness that was being suffered. Perhaps both. I enjoyed it.

[Stephanie]

I love it dear. Very enlightening, even if the title suggests otherwise!