Cat

Extremely lame

The kitten's white petticoat

Speckled grey and brown

Shimmered in the sunlight peeking through the window

His crescent eyes, wide and vivid yellow,

Flickered across the room

Searching ever-restlessly for the source

Of his small and meek beginnings.

Reviews

[Moflo]

You had some very strong descriptions here and I liked that a lot! I loved your word choice too, I think it really aids the presence of the poem.

[Steph's_romantic_myster..]

Aww this is so sweet I like the usage of words in this piece and the endearing quality that you portrayed here... Excellent piece and a favorite for my box