Virility

Virility

A Poem by MiaIntheSkywithDiamonds
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Maturity from boy to man.

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Sudden deepness of lowered tone

Boy to man he's finally grown

Short and squat now lean and long

Fancies the girl who wears a thong

Stubble does sprout under his chin

Tickles the neck of the girl he's with

Maturer than the boy he's been

A man of greater fancy's sin.

© 2011 MiaIntheSkywithDiamonds


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Growing into a man is more than developing
enough to fill a man`s pants.
In a few words you have described the process
almost completely . The bigee is for the boy
to fill the man`s responsibilities and that seems
to be the last category to develop.
Yes, this is an adorable, a terrific poem.
Thank you

----- Eagle Cruagh

Posted 12 Years Ago


My oh my....haha :D This is great Mia. Describes most of the boys I know to a T.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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MiaIntheSkywithDiamonds
MiaIntheSkywithDiamonds

Belmont, CA



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College student here, hit me up if you need to talk or anything else. I have a sincere love for life. I can get crazy, I can go downhill in a hurry, but when it comes down to it, life is a truly b.. more..

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